Sunday, 20 November 2016

Final Draft - Summary and Reader Response (Detroit House article).

In the article “This Detroit House is being turned into a living model of cost-saving sustainable design”, Peters (2016) illustrates how a group of three architecture graduates purchased a house with the intention of sharing their knowledge in sustainability with the community of Detroit through their project ‘“Motown Movement”’. The students conducted a brief research of Detroit and noticed the locals have already implemented some form of eco-friendly practices, however they are still lacking in knowledge of modifying their existing house in a more cost-efficient way. Hence, the students’ constructed a two-storey model house to use the ground level as a “training facility” while the upper level accommodates family who are homeless. Some sustainable examples incorporated in their model are usage of solar panels, “graywater system” for rainwater harvesting and converting of “sewage into biogas and fertiliser” using “septic tank”. The students are adopting the “do-it-yourself” method, as such the construction materials used should be easily available at any local supply stores. Owing to ‘“Motown Movement”’ being versatile, it can also be applicable to other climate conditions globally and the students aim to increase the awareness of sustainable design with more communities to educate them on the simplicity and benefits of it. While Peters is able to display some benefits of sustainable initiatives through the students’ project, I feel that her article is lacking in explaining the importance of sustainability in today’s society.

The first reason why Peters’ article is lacking in explaining the importance of sustainability is because it seems to focus largely on the cost-saving aspect. Reusing “materials from abandoned houses” and installing “insulation to reduce energy use as much as 70%” are example of savings in either construction materials or energy consumption costing. These examples are directed to the idea of finding “affordable” ways to improve an existing house to be cost-efficient. The savings in monetary terms should be an added advantage of sustainability rather than a focal point.

In contrast to the cost-saving benefits as shown through ‘“Motown Movement”’ in Peters’ article, the importance of sustainability can be divided into three pillars: environmental protection, economic development and social development (Mason, n.d.). The publication "Singapore Sustainable Blueprint 2015" (2014) discusses on all three pillars and is able to give the reader a well-rounded explanation on the need for sustainability. In Singapore’s context, the components such as reducing carbon footprint emission, reducing of wastes and saving of water resources falls under environmental protection. As per the publication, the competition for “finite supply of resources” (Singapore Sustainable Blueprint 2015, 2014, p. 10) will be increasing due to global development and population growth. With Singapore’s limitations, the need for optimising the use of “precious resources” (PM Lee, 2014, para. 7) is even more prevalent in order to keep up globally. In conjunction, businesses in Singapore will adopt environmentally-friendly practices to contribute to being a cutting-edge business hub. Future industrials estates will be introduced as “living laboratory that fosters creativity and innovation” (Singapore Sustainable Blueprint 2015, 2014, p. 16). Lastly on the social aspect, everyone in the nation will be the beneficiary of the desired outcomes of sustainability. This requires the communities, government and businesses to be united in “shaping our neighbourhoods and building a more gracious society together” (Singapore Sustainable Blueprint 2015, 2014, p. 17).

In conclusion, although Peters’ article discusses on the examples of simple sustainable techniques and its benefits, it does not convey the importance of sustainability. With the ever-increasing growth of population worldwide and a rapid depletion of natural resources, the collective efforts in sustainable development is crucial to remain competitive; and at the same time environmentally friendly.

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References

Mason, M. (n.d.). What Is Sustainability and Why Is It Important? Retrieved November 19, 2016, from http://www.environmentalscience.org/sustainability

Our Home, Our Environment, Our Future. Sustainable Singapore Blueprint 2015. (n.d.).  Retrieved November 19, 2016, from http://www.mewr.gov.sg/ssb/files/ssb2015.pdf

Peters, A. (2016, July 7). This Detroit House Is Being Turned Into a Living Model Of Cost-Saving Sustainable Design. Retrieved November 19, 2016, from https://www.fastcoexist.com/3061563/world-changing-ideas/this-detroit-house-is-being-turned-into-a-living-model-of-cost-saving-s

PM unveils Sustainable Singapore Blueprint 2015 to renew strategies for a liveable and sustainable Singapore. (2014, November 8). Retrieved November 19, 2016, from https://www.nccs.gov.sg/news/pm-unveils-sustainable-singapore-blueprint-2015-renew-strategies-liveable-and-sustainable

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