Sunday, 25 September 2016

1st Draft - Summary and Reader Response (Detroit House article).

In the article “This Detroit House is being turned into a living model of cost-saving sustainable design”, Peters (7 July 2016) illustrates how a group of three architecture graduates purchased a house with the intention of sharing their knowledge in sustainability with the community of Detroit. They have named the project ‘“Motown Movement”’ which is to transform their ideas into reality. Background studies by the students indicate that the locals have already implemented some form of eco-friendly practices. However, the locals are still lacking in knowledge of modifying their existing house in a more cost-efficient manner. As such, the student’s real-life two-storey model house serve two purposes; ground level acts as a “training facility” while the upper level is use to accommodate family who are homeless. Some sustainable examples incorporated are solar panels on the roof, a “graywater system” which harvest rainwater for flushing of toilets and even conversion of “sewage into biogas and fertiliser” using “septic tank”. They are also adopting “do-it-yourself” style hence the construction materials should be available at any local supply stores. Through the use of these simple techniques and a variety of methods, their project can also be applicable to other climate conditions globally. All in all, the students want to increase the awareness of sustainable design by constructing more of such houses alongside people to educate them on the simplicity and benefits of it. Peters has portray the direction the students are trying to achieve to a certain extent, however I feel that there is a lack in explanation on the driving factor behind the students’ decision in not attending “grad school like most of their classmates” and the need for sustainability.

The reason behind the students approach should be discussed in the article to give the reader a better understanding on the students’ decision in promoting sustainability. Firstly, the article mentions on reusing of “materials from abandoned houses” and “how to install insulation to reduce energy use as much as 70%”, which suggests saving of construction materials and lesser energy consumption. These are definitely some examples of saving energy and natural resources but the presentation of these examples seems to surround the idea on finding “affordable” ways to improve their existing house to be cost-efficient. Savings in monetary terms should be an added advantage of sustainability efforts rather than a focus.

Furthermore, the topic on sustainability should include other components such as reducing carbon footprint emissions, reducing wastes and saving water. In the publication “Singapore Sustainable Blueprint 2015”, it gives the reader a well-rounded explanation in the involvement of sustainability. As mentioned, the competition for “finite supply of resources” will be increasing due to global development and population growth. Singapore being a city state with multiple limitations, a well thought out and detailed planning is required to keep up with this competitive economy and yet at the same time optimising the use of “available resources”. Together with the examples discussed in Peters’ article, it will be clearer to the reader on the importance of sustainability - to create and safeguard a greener and environmental friendlier society for all.

In conclusion, while Adele Peters’ article discusses some examples of simple sustainable techniques and its benefits, it does not convey the primary need for sustainable efforts and why the students chose to construct a life model instead of furthering their studies.

References
Adele Peters. (2016, July 7). This Detroit House Is Being Turned Into a Living Model Of Cost-Saving Sustainable Design. Retrieved from https://www.fastcoexist.com/3061563/world-changing-ideas/this-detroit-house-is-being-turned-into-a-living-model-of-cost-saving-s

National Climate Change Secretariat (2014, November 8). PM unveils Sustainable Singapore Blueprint 2015 to renew strategies for a liveable and sustainable Singapore [Press Release]. Retrieved from https://www.nccs.gov.sg/news/press-releases?field_news_date_value%5Bvalue%5D%5Byear%5D=2014

Ministry of Environment and Water Resources and Ministry of National Development (2014). Sustainable Singapore Blueprint 2015. Retrieved from http://www.mewr.gov.sg/ssb/files/ssb2015.pdf

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